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 The Hammering of the Thumb

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PostSubject: The Hammering of the Thumb   May 8th 2010, 10:39 pm

The Hammering of the Thumb

A litany of blasphemous praise rages across the rooftops;
“Oh Lord!”, “Jesus Christ!”, “God Almighty!”
I hold my hands together in a mockery of prayer.
Grasping them tightly, I fall to my knees in supplication,
Begging for a deliverance from this pain
Now consuming my total consciousness,
With its throbbing memory
Of the wrong I have committed.
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PostSubject: Re: The Hammering of the Thumb   May 9th 2010, 4:48 am

Its hard to explain why but a bloody good swearing does ease the pain. Loved this.





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PostSubject: Re: The Hammering of the Thumb   May 9th 2010, 10:32 pm

ooh gosh, we all have such a beautiful language we use when we are in pain don't we.. at least for the most part that is the only time I swear.. too many memoriees of having my mouth washed out with soap when I was little still keep me awake at night..

enjoyed much, it's a very true statement too life.



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PostSubject: Re: The Hammering of the Thumb   May 10th 2010, 11:12 am

Yes, we have all had those days.
Good description of whacking your thumb!
Enjoyed. tc
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PostSubject: Re: The Hammering of the Thumb   May 12th 2010, 7:12 pm

Brillient,I loved the title.
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