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PostSubject: Rabbit   June 15th 2010, 1:12 pm

Midnight.
“Did you put the cat out”?
“Did you lock the door”?
“Did you turn the lights off”?
“Don’t you love me anymore”?
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One a.m.
“Am I’m putting weight on”?
“Do I need a brand new hair do”?
“I haven’t got a thing to wear”
“But you don’t care, do you”?
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Two a.m.
“You haven’t done that dripping tap”
“Or fixed the microwave”
“Your lazy and bone idle”
“And you treat me like a slave”
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3 months later
Not a gap between the silences
Release from gibbering hell
Peace, quiet and solitude
In his happy prison cell
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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 15th 2010, 3:40 pm

nice start not sure about the last bit confused lol
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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 18th 2010, 12:47 pm

Roll Laughing Now this is funny! Nothing like a nagging wife. I see he snapped,
and is happy with the new found peace and solitude! Enjoyed! tc
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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 19th 2010, 8:47 am

yeah he did her in hahahaha Silence is golden :-) very funny write
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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 19th 2010, 6:10 pm

Back a couple of hundred years ago she's have felt the wrath of the 'scolds bridle' Smile xxxx this made me smile K xxx


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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 19th 2010, 8:08 pm

Hahaha! Very good, Cari. Humor with a dark twist to it, gives a new meaning to "I'm so mad I could kill her". Well played my friend.
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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 19th 2010, 9:45 pm

at least he finally found some peace and quiet.. I laughed at the end, well done.

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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   June 20th 2010, 5:34 am

My God he dun the bugger in. High five on that one!





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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   December 26th 2010, 7:50 pm

oh yeah, bring on the dark side lol, loved the twist and the plot.

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PostSubject: Re: Rabbit   December 28th 2010, 3:42 pm

hahahaha Roll Laughing
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