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PostSubject: Career-day   September 8th 2010, 8:27 pm


I decided today,
picked lottery numbers with care,
nothing can stand in my way,
I will get rich from my chair.

I decided today,
I'll be a part of jet-set,
can't wait for the moral decay,
and a parking-space for my new jet.

I decided today,
so save space on tomorrow's front page,
I'll be posing with green stuff, needless to say,
and a hottie that's half of my age.

I decided today,
only numbers- they were all wrong,
a tax on stupidity, such a cliche,
it probably should be put in a song.

So I decided today,
things aren't really that bad,
'couse back-up plan's more than OK,
I'll just be a rock star instead.

Not exactly happy with it, but I have to warm up first. Very Happy

Will write, read and comment for food, when in the mood. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Career-day   September 13th 2010, 2:16 pm

Truly enjoyed this! We all want to get rich from our chair.
Some call it the scratching song... the scratching of the winning
ticket. Very clever! EXALT
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PostSubject: Re: Career-day   September 13th 2010, 6:24 pm

This poem reads smoothly. I like the repetition and not being deflated by disappointment. Your back up-plan sounds just as good to me. Jaz
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PostSubject: Re: Career-day   September 14th 2010, 6:43 pm

good luck with your plans.. if you need an agent I happen to know someone who knows the cousin to the guy who delivers newspapers to that guy who directed the movie "Godzilla vs the Beatles"..


really enjoyed, welcome back to the writers club.

~ DaNiel
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PostSubject: Re: Career-day   September 19th 2010, 6:07 am

Fun fun
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