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PostSubject: Santa Please Believe Me..   December 12th 2010, 7:16 pm




S A N T A
P L E A S E
B E L I E V E
M E




Santa please believe me, take me off the naughty list
I didn't mean to kick Tommy, trust me, I wish I had missed..
I'll be a good boy till Christmas, I promise, just like you and Mommy insist
Ooh Santa please believe me, take me off the naughty list..

I admit it was my fault the cat lost it's hair
Although Billy urged me to do it, on a double dare
And it was me who broke both the legs on the chair
Yet to punish me at Christmas.. just seems so unfair

Santa please believe me,, I'm on the straight and narrow path
No more cheating off Billy whom I sit next to in math
I'll even stop drowning my sisters dolls in my bubble bath,
Ooh Santa, you gotta believe me, I'm on the straight and narrow path..

I've turned over a new leaf, the household chores I will assist
And to help me remember Ill put this rubber band around my wrist
And the cookies Mommy leaves for you.. well, I'll try to resist..
If only Santa, you will believe me, take me off the naughty list..

(If only till after Christmas..)




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PostSubject: Re: Santa Please Believe Me..   February 15th 2011, 6:56 pm

lol, Daniel. It's easy to imagine letters, just like this, being addressed to the North Pole every year. The boyish spirit comes through quite well. I especially like the little confessions. Be good. H x



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PostSubject: Re: Santa Please Believe Me..   February 20th 2011, 4:00 pm

Haha! This gave me a chuckle, having grown up without the Santa Claus myth. This piece gives me some insight as to how some of my friends may have been thinking as Christmas grew nearer during our childhoods. Thanks for the read and the laugh, my friend. A pleasure as always.
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PostSubject: Re: Santa Please Believe Me..   March 21st 2011, 8:45 am

you sound like my kids. Wink Nicely done.
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PostSubject: Re: Santa Please Believe Me..   March 30th 2011, 7:49 pm

Haha I enjoyed this piece. It was really cute. (:

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PostSubject: Re: Santa Please Believe Me..   April 6th 2011, 7:19 am

Yes the santa wont come m yth was good for controlling the little blighters for at least a month before Christmas lol. Loved this.





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