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 Salty Sweet

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PostSubject: Salty Sweet    March 21st 2011, 8:36 am

Admiring your package in the store
The shape of meat you put upon display
My time without you makes me want you more

I had to bring you home with me today
My pleasures with you always worth the price
And so I do not hesitate to pay

With eagerness both tender and precise
I carefully expose your flesh to view
Ignoring all my therapist's advice

I'm helpless and I don't know what to do
I taste your salty sweetness and I moan
My nose enraptured with the scent of you

I cannot leave you Bacon Bars alone.

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PostSubject: Re: Salty Sweet    March 22nd 2011, 10:50 am

Roll Laughing Roll Laughing Roll Laughing This is a riot! What a hoot! Now this is funny!
EXALT! You did a great job leading me on reading this, the ending is great!
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PostSubject: Re: Salty Sweet    March 24th 2011, 7:53 pm

I love this annie, very funny! Laughing

I am seduced by chocolate bars on a daily basis, never heard of bacon bars though!

Great build up in this write and a hilarious conclusion, cleverly rhymed throughout.

Thanks for sharing, ptp x EXALT Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Salty Sweet    March 28th 2011, 7:52 am

Erotic and funny - an unusual combination Razz
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