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Dr Fogg

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PostSubject: Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.   April 21st 2011, 6:54 am

Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.


You are my worst enemy
Mcvities half covered digestives
That chocolate on one side
So sensual even suggestive

The crunch when I bite into you
That wheaty chocolate flavour
An after taste to die for
To cherish and to savour.

If that weren’t bad enough
When I dunk you in my tea
You become soft and submissive
A seductress to fatty me.

Get thee behind me satanic biscuit
Though I love you so completely
Let me eat my five a day
You shall not defeat me.

(But I have a packet in my desk, just in case)

Dr Fogg
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PostSubject: Re: Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.   April 21st 2011, 11:14 am

Foggy, We can all relate to the temptation of food. Especially chocolate! I loved
this my friend. This would be a great skit for SNL! Loved it. EXALT! tc
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PostSubject: Re: Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.   May 18th 2011, 8:50 pm

Ah, Dr. Fogg, an ode to your addiction is no shame. Wink Now share, you can't have biscuits without sharing!


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PostSubject: Re: Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.   June 15th 2011, 8:13 pm

Just had a nice cuppa and a plain, dry digestive biscuit Sad , not nearly as good as the cocolate ones (especially the dark chocolate ones) but, at least it was Mcvities! Very Happy

Enjoyed this write, enjoyed the biscuit, lovely! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Mcvities half covered digestive biscuits.   June 17th 2011, 11:17 am

Aah, the Mcvities Digestive - only approached in deliciousness by the custard cream Very Happy

What a great tribute to a marvellous biscuit!
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