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Jamie
Posts : 2215 Karma : 233 Location : Vermont
| Subject: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 25th 2010, 2:58 pm | |
| (This could've gone in Music as well but it fits here)
Can't get me inspired (da DA da Da Dum) Can't find me my muse Lord, now I'm so tired Of these can't write NU-thin' blooooooz
Oh I need some inspiration My imagination Has mental constipation And you know it's the truuuuuuth
Got my paper and pen Gonna try it again Thought my muse was my friend But she's dead set on snoooooze
And I ain't got no direction Don't need no perfection My writing's all confection That ain't got no connection
Don't know why she's desertin' But my writing, it's hurtin' And there's one thing for certain-- Got those can't write NU-thin' bloooooz
All these words I'm proud of knowin' Gimme nuthin for show-in' Head's so full it's close to blowin' But ain't NU-thin' comin' thruuuuuuu
'Cause I ain't got nothing left but I would give my left nut To get the hell outta this rut And find my lyrical strut
But I'm stuck here tryin' Cryin' Pryin' At my Can't Write Nuthin' Blooooooooooooooooooooz | |
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| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 25th 2010, 3:01 pm | |
| "Get outta this rut,,, and find my lyrical strut"... LOL " My imagination has mental constipation"..... I have to say this coming from you is an eye opener.... Something different and fun. EXALT!! |
| | | Dr Fogg
Posts : 1277 Karma : 255 Location : Devon, England.
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 25th 2010, 5:37 pm | |
| Some of your lines equal the great George Gershwin's, such as "when he was a roamin in that fishes abdomen"! This was juicy and meaty and wholesome stuff, I think your muse is in tip top condition my friend. | |
| | | Myth
Posts : 575 Karma : 72 Location : Ascending
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 25th 2010, 6:27 pm | |
| You have discovered the cure for writer's block. Now we just need to comission the right singer, and post a link....
Very clever, I loved it. | |
| | | Daniel
Posts : 1616 Karma : 230 Location : under the oak tree with Kiki
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 25th 2010, 8:30 pm | |
| very very clever, one of those "why didn't I think of that" songs.. I loved it and the humor just added to the cleverness of the lines.
however, you may be wrong about your must deserting you... it seems if it did, it left you a wonderful goodbye letter.
take care,
~ Daniel | |
| | | Granny_Weatherwax
Posts : 377 Karma : 28
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 26th 2010, 5:46 am | |
| This was tons of fun, Jamie, whish I could hear you sing it. | |
| | | Jamie
Posts : 2215 Karma : 233 Location : Vermont
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 26th 2010, 9:32 am | |
| I actually was singing it last night but I don't have the chutzpa to put it online. . . | |
| | | Dr Fogg
Posts : 1277 Karma : 255 Location : Devon, England.
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 27th 2010, 10:13 am | |
| Go on Jamie, if i can do a radio interview in front of 470,000 people im sure you could do this in front of all four poet share members. | |
| | | parttimepoet
Posts : 471 Karma : 102 Location : Hertfordshire, U.K
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 27th 2010, 10:49 am | |
| This is great, so clever and funny. I love the blues, and John Lee Hooker could have done this proud! Being as he's no longer available for hire, i'm with the others, you should entertain us on poetshare! EXALT for making me smile and sing this outloud!! ptpx | |
| | | windowflower
Posts : 182 Karma : 27
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 27th 2010, 11:01 am | |
| 'Cause I ain't got nothing left but I would give my left nut To get the hell outta this rut And find my lyrical strut
hilarious.. | |
| | | Baseball Poetess
Posts : 687 Karma : 185
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 28th 2010, 6:41 pm | |
| - Jamie wrote:
- I actually was singing it last night but I don't have the chutzpa to put it online. . .
Your voice can't be any worse than mine. Really, I loved it. That's one of the things I sometimes do when I can't think of what to write, I listen to music and parody it until something sticks. Or mock it. Or both. | |
| | | Isobelle
Posts : 1832 Karma : 359 Location : amongst the stars ~
| Subject: Re: Can't Write Nu-thin' Blooz March 29th 2010, 1:32 am | |
| HAHA Jamie how did I miss this corker? I picked out the same lines as flower, what a hoot LOL. I can hear you at the stables first thing in the morning singing this to your horses hehe x Very different from you and I just LOVE the blues, wish I could have heard you singin it matey - cracking write, Kerry xxxx | |
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Had We But Worlds Enough, And Time . . . | November 5th 2013, 11:57 am by Jamie | I never wanted to write this post. Life, however, brings to us changes of necessity, not changes we want.
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New Poetry Prompt! | July 25th 2013, 2:21 pm by Jamie | Hi friends!
It's been a busy summer for us here at Poet Share, as the sunshine has called us away more than usual. We've posted a new poetry prompt today for you summery, adventurous types.
Let us know if you have any questions or concerns via PM if we're not on site. We hope to be back online fully staffed by mid-September!
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