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 A good (ad)vice

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PostSubject: A good (ad)vice   April 10th 2010, 5:04 am

A good (ad)vice

My mother lectures all year long:
„Tell me,
what have I done wrog?
Why must you be so wild,
why don't you go to church,
oh, why, my dearest child,
instead of God you boys research?
Just look at neighbors daughter
attends mass three times per day!
She drinks the holy water,
oh, how humbly does she pray!“

I have met the girl next door,
she told me: „Give it a shot!“
now I always come for more,
(the priest is really hot!!!)
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PostSubject: Re: A good (ad)vice   April 11th 2010, 7:02 pm

Shame on you, great poem though.


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PostSubject: Re: A good (ad)vice   April 11th 2010, 7:11 pm

I have always heard it's those girls who go to church all the time you have to watch out for.. However, it's hard to get in such a mood when there is a picture of Jesus on the wall staring at you the entire time...

enjoyed, quirky and clever

~ Daniel
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PostSubject: Re: A good (ad)vice   April 11th 2010, 7:19 pm

Always beware the girl next door,mathew
chapter ten' LOL
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