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Dr Fogg

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PostSubject: Romeo!   April 25th 2010, 2:46 pm






Romeo

"Romeo, Romeo wherefore art thou?
I hear your singing yet see you not somehow"

"I’m down here beneath your balcony
Where I doth play loves symphony".

"Romeo, Romeo wherefore art thou?
Would that you could show yourself right now"

"I said I’m down here, look down and you shall see
Where I pluck my strings for you and me".

"Romeo, Romeo wherefore art thou?
Come to me where ere you be, fulfil your lovers vow"

"IM DOWN HERE merely feet away
Tell you what, bugger this, Ill come back another day".


Dr Fogg.

Copyright ©2010. HW Harborne





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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 26th 2010, 6:21 am

I think Romeo may be a bit sick of all the attention he is getting.. All he wanted is to be left alone with his sweetheart and look at all the trouble that happened as a result. For being the great great great great great (and a couple more greats) grandson of someone who knew the Bard (and prob. owed him money) you did pretty good with this. Enjoyed much

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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 26th 2010, 7:23 am

Lol, very funny, just confusing a bit when you read it first maby, I think you should break the lines or something, just to make it even more obvious where the Juliets line ends and Romeos begins. Or I don't know, maby it's just me, that stumbbled over this.


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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 26th 2010, 11:06 am

Foggy, truly I see the humor in this.
Juliet is deaf and blind! And poor Romeo
blew her off... loved it!! Great twist on
an old lovers hark. EXALT!
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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 26th 2010, 1:56 pm

Thanks for the comments folks, I too found it a bit awkward and didnt do anything about it, pure laze, I will place quotation marks round each one, maybe thatll do it. Thanks for the advise.





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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 27th 2010, 12:43 am

I know what you mean as poets at times
we get lazy we won't to write but can't be bothered
the sun for sorrow will not show its head
some will be punished some will be banished
for there has never such tale THAN OF YULIET AND HER ROMEO
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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 27th 2010, 10:56 am

lmao Romeo, Romeo, wherefore art my glasses, Romeo?

Too funny, foggy. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 2:44 pm

hehe
did u know '"Romeo, Romeo wherefore art thou? ' means romeo romeo why is your name romeo'
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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 3:47 pm

Yes i did but it seemed to fit so well lol.In Northern Britain they often say where are thou, to mean where the hell are you.

luv Bill





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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 4:36 pm

Lol its about the only interesting thing i learned about the whole play!
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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 6:14 pm

HAHA!!! All I could see whilst reading this was a pair of pensioners without teeth acting out the play .... thanks for the giggle Foggy, how I'd love a night out with you and your family, what a hoot LOL Kerry xxxx


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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 6:16 pm

Do I have to bring the family?





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PostSubject: Re: Romeo!   April 28th 2010, 6:20 pm

I'd never stop laughing all night if I went out with you .... it would be awesome Smile Next time I'm in Devon I'm coming round for a cuppa hehe xxxxx Cool cyclops Juggle


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