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Carousal

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PostSubject: Zap   February 15th 2011, 9:39 am

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I’ll tell you I’m really gutted and sick
Of being Potters neglected stick
Cos when the credits start to scroll
You’ll never see my name unroll
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It may occur, you may reflect
That he would treat me with respect
Not shove me up his scabby clothes
To scratch his back and pick his nose
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It’s the same with Masie his flying broom
She was made to soar and zoom
But to her everlasting shame
She’s made to play that stupid game
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So I say begone you bespectacled rat
You mop haired clown, you juvenile brat
For the very next time, I’ll tell you squire
When you squeal out a spell, I may backfire
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PostSubject: Re: Zap   February 15th 2011, 7:09 pm

Haha, very apt, Cari. Well-crafted from the first stanza: I like how "the credits" sets the tone, while the last wraps it up ... as many of us would like. Congrats for your Bi-Annual Award. H x



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