A dialog between a doctor and his patient

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An old one, but I thought it would be worth posting here too. Smile

A dialog between a doctor and his patient

D: How are we feeling today, my dear boy?
P: Ok (if I overlook being psychiatrys toy...)
D: I'm here only to help you (You're as mad as they come.)
P: Doc, I'm in thouch with reality (just not your particular one)!
D: Come now, reality is a serious matter...
P: How come you're so sure, yours is so better?
D: I can see it, smell it, feel it by thouch...
P: So can I, you should know that doesn't really say much.
D: My path is the one, where the science has walked.
P: Yeah, I hear a few years ago the lobbotomy rocked!
D: That was a little misunderstanding, a small, insignificant stain!
P: You mean like the one between the Bush and Hussain?
D: It doesn't change fact, that you're living a lie!
P: Come on, what's the difference between you and I?
D: The difference is in the Truth I did obtain.
P: Not the truth, doc, just your own licence to be insane...

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I enjoyed this. I like how you have like
this almost dr. jekyl and mr. hyde persona
happening. Brilliantly done!!

Subject: Re: A dialog between a doctor and his patient March 23rd 2010, 2:01 am

what a fun poem, I enjoyed it alot. I got a real kick about the line about Bush and Hussain.. didn't expect it..

take care

~ Daniel

Posts : 1277 Karma : 255 Location : Devon, England.

Although humorous this poem has just enough truth in it to make one think. I have a very healthy disrespect for all so called professionals.

Posts : 150 Karma : 81 Location : South Carolina

Very nicely done. Funny, witty, and engages the differences in perspective to make a point. Unique in its presentation too.

Posts : 365 Karma : 38 Location : Liverpool. UK

I think you are as mad as a hattter
thats just my profssional opinion

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