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Carousal
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| Subject: Party Time September 22nd 2010, 1:08 pm | |
| Party Time
It was on the night before Halloween A more ghastly sight you have never seen The committee met in the creepy crypt The chairman put down his bloodstained script ”Ok its all agreed, well that’s just fine. Come on guys, its PARTY TIME” ~ "For three hundred years I’ve wept these tears and played the tormented nun But for tonight, in the bright moonlight I’m a’ going to have some fun" ~ The lady in red Squealed “I know I’m dead. It’s not my fault I can’t lie down. So stuff you all I’m having a ball I’m all yours for half-a –crown” ~ The headless horseman took her hand Together they danced to the ghostly band “I would give you a kiss, if you had a head” He rubbed his belly and to her said ”No worries girl, kiss me here instead” ~ Highwayman Bill from the city of Leeds Skewered to a tree for his dastardly deeds A hairy dude in need of a shave In spite of his predicament joined in the Rave Drawing his flintlocks, a right handsome pair Fired them into the cold frosty air ~ A flock of witches from far off Devon Ghouls from Glasgow on a 747 Skeletons, phantoms, spirits galore Dancing, prancing, begging for more Then, by the light of a half hearted dawn Wending homeward on October morn ~ So sorry folk’s its all over I fear No ‘trick or treat’ for the kiddies this year The ghosties are knackered, their tired out and done They send their apologies for spoiling your fun Ok Halloween’s cancelled but don’t you despair I’ll send Ma in Law over, God!! That ull give you a scare | |
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| Subject: Re: Party Time September 23rd 2010, 9:46 am | |
| Cari, this is a neat write! Melodious in verse, would be great for a song to play at Halloween time. Great imagery, awesome composition using a topic I would of never thought about. EXALT! |
| | | Daniel
Posts : 1616 Karma : 230 Location : under the oak tree with Kiki
| Subject: Re: Party Time September 23rd 2010, 10:03 pm | |
| loved the last line, I'm still laughing although I'm a bit sad they cancelled Halloween..
very fun read my friend, tc
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| | | hearmyverse
Posts : 365 Karma : 38 Location : Liverpool. UK
| Subject: Re: Party Time September 30th 2010, 11:43 pm | |
| Brllient tale I agree with Daniel I loved the ending line. | |
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